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Post by Sir Daniel on Jun 14, 2005 19:14:45 GMT -5
Sir Dan, Ton Kimseng here this is the opening page to my interactive cd Ton Kimseng This is a page with a submenu for thumbnails or numbers for content selection Ton Kimseng Attched is 1 of 2 phot pages of my interactive cd Ton Kimseng Attached is 2 of 2 of the photopage of my Interactive Ton Kimseng Attached is one graphic work for my graphic link I like the liquid organic feel of your interface design, however the choice of font and text does not do justice to it. Please re-do the buttons and find suitable font for your interactive design. Remember to apply consistency in your design, in your case, the choice of buttons, interface text and font should complement your fluid-techie design. Give me your 20 content studies and get ready to present them on friday. Sir Daniel
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Post by Sir Daniel on Jun 14, 2005 19:39:10 GMT -5
Jephte Herrera web_page photo_page main_page intro_page The digital spider is an interesting concept, and looking at your design I personnally feel something that needs to add as a punch... Probably animating the spider or animating the web or redoing the angles of your graphic interface. Most of your content is corporate in nature and I feel that it complements the design. However be aware that something that corporate restricts the harmony of artistic design...which some of your content may be knocked off.... and yes, the lower left red button MMA shouts "click me" louder than your more pertinent links. Please give me alternative studies of your work. Keep on going. Sir Daniel
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Post by Sir Daniel on Jun 14, 2005 19:52:06 GMT -5
screenshots of my studies - joyce serrano MAIN PAGE CONTACTS PAGE WORX PAGE ARTIST PAGE Nice clean layout for an interactive. Love the approach and your description for animated figures to spice up the scene. I do have to throw a question though: Why name it the dot when you have a lot of squares around? Sir Daniel
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Post by Sir Daniel on Jun 14, 2005 19:57:41 GMT -5
jason lim front cover back cover 1st layout Now this is what I expect to find in an MMA artist. Simple & direct no nonsense portfolio. Like the concept incorporating your own artwork for the front and back design. I just hope your content studies are a match to your good design front and back cover. Please present your 20 content studies ... Sir Daniel
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Post by Sir Daniel on Jun 14, 2005 20:01:21 GMT -5
leah rosario Nice use of neutrals. grays are pretty safe, since they let you have focus on your works with their natural tone down.... and nice play of opacities on your design. I look forward to your content studies and same with Jason, Good Job! Keep on working! Sir Daniel
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Post by redvaldez on Jun 15, 2005 2:21:38 GMT -5
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Post by Sir Daniel on Jun 16, 2005 7:31:40 GMT -5
fisrt content second content third content fourth content fifth content Robert, I like your other content studies except the 1st one...it needs a better layout. Please refer to the other studies you made as a reference. I personally feel the style is good and consistent and knowing how your contents are, its is really a good improvement to present it in your current format. Note however, I dont recall approving the item on your right side of your first content study, better you leave it out of your portfolio since it clashes with your work. You can leave the space for the website you made in a two-page spread rather than squeeze them. Present all of the content studies tom and do the revisions, so we can begin designing your marketing collateral. Keep on the good work! Sir Daniel
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Post by Sir Daniel on Jun 16, 2005 7:38:00 GMT -5
Great work la ako ma-say...it really helps kung Pr0 meal gamit parents mo...just kidding. Love the colors and the studies...I just hope you show all the content studies tom for approval so you can work on your marketing collateral Konti nalang! Sir Daniel
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Post by Sir Daniel on Jun 16, 2005 7:43:05 GMT -5
jason lim front cover back cover Nice work Jason...you reached my expectations. As for the San Miguel bottle, please secure a letter to use the photo with their brand for your portfolio...better sure than sorry ok? Pwede ka habulin ng San Miguel... Sir Daniel
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Post by Sir Daniel on Jun 16, 2005 7:52:07 GMT -5
Magsama kayo ni Dianne...hiya-hiya pa sa work nyo. You can post up to 4 studies and the rest links...overkill medyo si Jason... Anyway love all your work...galingan mo sa panelling lang ha? Practice Speaking. Excellent work! Sir Daniel
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